Reviews for Dawning
This is off to such a good start! It's always weird for me to see Kennedy with someone other than Willow and Dawn with someone other than Faith or Xander, but their friendship works, as I think their romance will. Hmmm... Do those little snippets mean by chance a little Buffy/Willow action may be in the offing as well? ;)
Seriously, very well done, as always! Keep the chappies coming, okay? :) |
really great
i'm not a Kennedy/Dawn fan but i'm a fan of yours so i liked it a lot
keep on & update son |
| I read the fic because I love the Kennedy/Dawn pairing. I noted how good the fic was as I went through, and only at the end looked at the author, Should have known it was Willowfan lol. Another awesome fic. Please update asap! |
| its great i love kennedey and dawn pairings! please continue |
| I like it alot please update soon |
| well if the girls kiss justin maybe out of luck. cintinue please |
| Freakin' Awesome. Can't wait to see the Kennedy/Dawn thing happen, adn also curious about the Buffy/Willow! |
| Woo! *dances* oh yeah, you rock! I love it, :D :D :D...Keep on going, I'm back and wanna read sooooooo bad woo, I'm all smily :D...XxX |
| Love it, as always! Really liked the kissing practice and pillow fight(Hey, honorary Xander here ;) ) And LOVED the clueless remark, cause they are! NExt chappie's ready, right? |
| Awesome story. Please continue with it. |
| looks like Dawn and Kennedy aren't the only ones getting closer. please continue |
| I like this story. I really like the fact you are not having Dawn and Kennedy fall for each other right away. Keep up the good work. |
| Wow! Yay, I checked about 50 times yesterday for the update before I went to bed lol, but it was on when I got up this morning, and my mum wondered why I started jumping up and down like a mad person...This story is so damn good!...Please don't stop...I love your work...Thank you again...Luvyaz XxX |
great chapter
in this story, Kennedy & Dawn look cute together
and i hadn't seen the Willow/buffy thing coming
keep on |
| Wow i love it, really great story please please update soon. |
| ooh lovin this fic haha hope to see more :D |
| Wow, this story is excellent! Please update soon. I am in love with this story so far and would love to see where you take it! =) |
| Awesome chapter. Can;t wait fo the Dawn/Kennedy stuff more. Update asap! |
| perfect, Faith is smart enough to see the feelings Willow has for Buffy and the ones Kennedy has for Dawn and is tactless enough to call them on it just to screw with them. please continue soon |
great chapter
i liked the kitchen scene with Willow & Kennedy
Faith's boldness may be the thing that will make them all realise the feelings they have for the other
keep on & update soooon |
| I love this fanfic so much. It's makes Kennedy and Dawn seem like they'd be great couple. |
| This is my absolute favorite story EVER. You never cease to amaze me. |
| Yay, Methinks thats 2 down now, Russian/English Dictionary and One Eared Teddy hehe...Correct me if I'm wrong cause it's likely...My computer is nackered, both of them...so here I am, at my aunties, 'doing her accounts' *innocent eye roll*...The tension is tight and the suspense is deadly!!!...But...Willowfan YOU ROCK! Your updates are worth any wait I go thru...Keep goin I love ya! XxX |
| the way Dawn's acting, you would think she's the blond Summers. continue soon |
really good chapter
i really liked what Willow said:"... Sometimes-I think our hearts don’t know the difference.”, it is so true
please update soon |
| plz plz plz keep on going i love this one |
| Sorry I wasn't available to beta :( On the other hand, I seem to be doing better, so next time for sure! :) Anyway, loved it, of course. Willow playing matchmaker and Buffy as oblivious as always! Just perfect! :) :) Keep'em coming, okay? |
| This is really great. It's coming along really well, setting everything up for a hella story. Can't wait to read more. |
| I love this story. Love the D/K pairing and all the drama and angst. Another one of your amazing stories. Please post more asap! Thanks. |
I love ths story plz plz plz keep on with it its great ok well keep up the good work
bye bye |
| well at least that solves one problem. update soon so Faith can fix Dawn and Kennedy. |
A looong chapter!! I like it :)
"Lock’em in a room together. Feed’em to the next vampire that raises" LOL
And the Faith-Buffy-Willow triangle... interesting...
Great fic, update ASAP! |
| Such an amazing update. Damn...I want Faith to get with Willow now. Ahhh conflict. Like that you brought in that extra element there i.e. something to complicate Willow getting together with Buffy. So...I am now a supporter of W/F and D/K. It was a great chapter. Angsty....as I love it. Update asap! |
this chapter was really great & funny, especially the last scene
W/F is not something that we often see, it could be really interesting
was Willow more confused about Faith's kiss or Buffy's?
i can't wait to know!! |
| Oh my god, you SO can't stop there! Go, write, write! |
| Wow!!!! You have to update soon or even sooner than that;) I love the W/F/B Triangle.. |
| its amazing i cant wait to see what happens with dawn and kennedy |
| Yay you, ace chap!!!...:D...:D...:D...The tension is killing me more than Faith, but no feeding them to vampires or I shall pout lol...Hmm, update soon!...The Faith/Buffy/Willow thing should be rather interesting :)...Luvyaz XxX |
| Finally getting around to reviewing! Great chappie, as always. Love the tension. I'm siding with Faith, though. Lock'em in a room and don't let'em out til one's dead or they both have that "Just got laid" afterglow. Either works, really. And the F/W/B thing is too cute! :) |
| Great, as always. Really loved the basement scene! ;) And Xander's world ending line is priceless!! :) :) |
| Finally-An update! I squealed and got weird looks when I saw it...ahem, anyway, loved it, as usual. |
| well, now that Dawn and Kennedy are together, and Faith and Willow have gotten started. You need to find someone for Buffy(not Spike though) great update |
| Glad you're updating. Love all your stories. Great chapter. I am so happy that Willow picked Faith over Buffy. Can't wait for more about them and like group reaction etc. LOVE IT! Thanks. Post more soon! |
Hi there, I really like how your made a W/F pairing. Its really cute! I love it, the 2nd best after Kennedy. Also the D/K pairing is good too. LoL.
I was wondering if you were going to update the "Surprises" story. I'm really loving that one, and wanna see what happens to Dawn and Em.
Just curious, love your writing! |
It's been a while.
I was wondering when you'd get back to this story. |
| This Story = Love. Can't get enough of it! |
| Love it, as always! Xander is totally spot on and perfect and I *love* Faith wanting to go slow while the kids wanna go faster. All in all, I want the next one soon! :) |
| love the three way threatening of Kennedy, but all I'm asking is a little happiness for Buffy. please |
| I love Faith/Willow. The bit where Faith was like "I need slow too" was so sweet. Love it, looking forward to more updates. Amazing story as usual. Post soon! Thanks. |
| Long chapter – just the way I like um. Loved the part where Willow’s all embarassed and doesn’t know what to say after Xander overhears her and Faith in the kitchen - funny. It’s cute the way Kennedy and Dawn are acting, but I don’t think their deal with Buffy is gonna last very long – teenage hormones and easy access – dangerous combination. And I love the way you’re writing Faith and Willow’s relationship. Can’t wait for more ... :) |
| WOW that was a really good update. Can't wait to see what is going to happen |
| poor Dawn and Kennedy think they got away with it. I can't wait to see if the guys call them on it. Willow and Faith are really cute together, but Buffy seems to be a little lonely. please find someone to make Buffy happy, please. |
| Wow this chapter was really good. I really like the faith/willow parts. They are so cut together. Keep it up |
| I so love Will and Faith together. Also, such a great ending, with Dawn and Kennedy having some tension over how may girls Kenn might have been with before Dawn lol. Thanks for updating. Looking forward to the next one. Update soon! |
| What a great week. I’m so happy that so many of my favorite writers have updated their stories. I absolutely love this story. Your writing is incredible and I love the Kennedy/Dawn pairing. I’ve always been more of a Kennedy/Willow fan, but your doing such an amazing job of writing their relationship that this is fast becoming one of my favorite stories. And the Faith/Willow bits are great – funny and sweet. Loved the tension at the end between Kennedy & Dawn – hope it doesn’t ruin the rest of their day. Eagerly looking forward to your next update ... |
| Read the last couple of chapters again because I love the Faith/Will angle of this story. Update soon! Thanks |
| I am totally in love with this fic...One of the best fics I have seen all year. |
| Amazing as usual. Love the bit where Dawn confesses about 'skipping' school because of the present from Buffy. Also, love all Faith/Willow stuff. Like that element of the fic, hope to see lots more of the story focusing on them lol. Also, looking forward to how this story develops now that both W/F and D/K pairings are established. Update soon! Thanks. |
| can't wait to see what the dog gets named in a house full of potentials. poor Dawn thought she pulled one over on Buffy only to find out she was set up. |
| Wow I loved that story I do hope there is more to come ! I will look forward to hearing more from this fic it was great! |
| Loved it. Another great chapter. I have to say I'm a big Faith fan and I love how you write her!!!!! |
| Great update. Loved how you guys wrote the whole “sweeping” issue. The bathroom scene was hot – from the way things are going, it’s gonna be hard for them to keep their part of the deal. It’s good that Kennedy is trying to take things slow and not rush Dawn, but sometimes you should just go with your feelings and let go. Faith and Willow are so cute together – love their interaction. Buffy needs to find someone. Keep the updates coming ... :) |
| Willowfan...I lub youuuuuuu...This story is rockin'!!! I'm sorry I haven't been reading it when you update but internet and computer been playing up, and I'm all caught up now, so I hope another installment reaches my screen soon, hopefully have internet in my room again soon which is all good. Please, please, please more 'cos it's so brill!!! Fankooooooooo XxX |
| Yet another sterling example to your work. I love the pup's name and that she's being a puppy, no matter how much it bugs Faith! :) And things are finally gettin' steamy; Yes!! :) :) :) Hurry with the next chapter, okay? |
| hopefully Buffy doesn't come home or more than Kennedy is going to be dead, but if you find someone to hook Buffy up with maybe she will be to distracted to notice. hint hint, great update continue soon |
| Another brilliant update. I love the way it built up to both of their first times, and the whole Faith suggesting a movie for the others so that she could get the house empty. I am curious if Buffy will get angry with Faith and Willow when/if she finds out about Dawn/Kennedy. Hmmm.....Great story, love it, update soon! Thanks. |
| What a way to start the day – that update was so hot & steamy. The puppy scene at the beginning was great. It was cute when Kennedy did not want to make love for the first time with Dawn while under the influence of the double H’s. The movie idea/plan was great – allowing both couples some alone time. Hope Buffy doesn’t come home early and interupt them, she really needs to find someone. I'm loving this story - pleaseeee update soon ... :) |
Loved the puppy scence-Faith and her leathers...Yeah, I kinda love this story. Actually, ALL of your stories are amazing, but lng story short, this update was great, with the clearing out the house and faith distracting Wil so Dawn and Kennedy can do the dirty. Much love.
Later |
| Love the new chapter I really liked the dog chewing the trouser leg, such a puppy thing! (great attention to detail there!) |
| DAMN!!!! That chapter was hot. Great writing. You were so descriptive that I could picture practically everything. Can't wait to read more. |
| boy, is Buffy in trouble in the morning or maybe Faith will give Buffy a pass seeing as though she let Kennedy and Dawn make love while Buffy was out. Robin works for Buffy seeing as though they looked good together on the show before the whole Spike fiasco, can't wait to see what he wants. |
| Love you baby. hehe my crazy lil auckie. gonna miss you so much in the next 3 weeks. Wanna hold you so bad. wish you were comin with me. best birthday present ever :) i dont need anything else when i know i hav you. your my girl always. love you wolfy xxx |
| oh. great chapter btw hehe. lovin the story |
| Oooohhh, your good ... that update was awesome. You had all the right ingredients in all the right places. The love scenes were incredible – hot. Buffy walking in on Faith & Willow and then having Kennedy and Dawn walk up behind her was hilarious. Your doing an awesome job with this story... :) |
| Still loving you! Aww, STRIPY TOE SOCKS...they are sexy...that was on my to do list hehe...don't think I've completed it yet...may be something I have to do soon...Please write more, I'll make sure I check in on the fleeting occasions I'll be at home this month, I'm all ditzy and in various places...but very much want to read *nod*...Thank you again, XxX |
| Loved it as always, especially the tricking of Buffy and the last bit. Next one please! :) |
| Brilliant, such a hilariously funny ending with Buffy bursting into the room etc. So looking forward to any awkwardness in the next chapter LOL. Update soon! |
| wow absolutely loved it...although i still don't know what was actually pary of the challenge. so will there e more? oh please write more!!! |
| Wow that was really something I loved it I can just see the look on Buffy's face at the end ! |
| Great as always. Hope Kennedy is gonna be okay and that Willow can talk Faith down before Buffy has too big of a flashback! ^_^ |
| nice cliffhanger you left us with there, can't wait to what the outcome is. |
| Nice update! Can't wait to see if Faith goes bad...You're not gonna let Kennedy die are you? *pouts*...I love your writing, and thank you for choosing today to update! As I've had a lot of crap recently, and it cheered me up as always! XxX |
| Wow. Love the update. What an ending. Good time to see what happens between Will and Faith when things aren't perfect. Also, Buffy's reaction to both Kennedy making out with Dawn, and her opinion on Will dating Faith if Faith acts badly. Love this fic, love all your fics in fact lol. Update asap! thanks |
| Ok, first off: I'm fine. Nothing's broken or wrong in the world of me. Second: I've caught up with this story and I absoltely love it! However, I'm very worried about Kennedy so you should write more ASAP so I know what happens. I'm not a patient person (you should know!) Miss you lots! |
| Finally I get a chance to review. Great chapter – I loved it. Poor Kennedy – she’s got to be ok. Loved the kitchen scene with Dawn’s striped toe socks and Kennedy’s reaction when she see’s Dawn. I love all your stories and I’m eagerly looking forward to updates on any of your stories. :) |
| just to say that this was amasing you had me at the edge of my chair constanly and i nearly fell off my chair in astonisment a coupple of times. Just to recap this was AMASING |
| Nicely written and I love the interaction for both couples. Very spot on. The bit with the First is gruesome, but so necessary. Can't wait for the next bit! :) |
| great update and back with a bang. I can't wait to see what you are planning. |
| hehe love it :) keep goin x |
Oh my god, an update...
about time, jeez! Love it
I needed itto breathe, this is
my favorite story. Love the W/F.
Later |
| Aww, poor Will :-(... Good that she has Faith... And kinda scared for Dawn and Kenn with the upcoming Buffy lecture, don't reckon she's going to be *that* awful though, she seems pretty cool with the idea now... I'm glad you updated, I was beginning to think most people were forgetting about my challenge hehe... You are however, doing a wonderful job, as always, of keeping me entertained, so thankyou! And as ever, update soon! XxX |
| Yeahhh, you updated ... great chapter. I felt bad for Willow – re-living Tara's death, but Faith is there to help her get thru it. It was very touching when Dawn tolded Buffy that she loved Kennedy. And I loved the scene where Buffy tells Dawn that she already knew about her and Kennedy but is pretending not to. I'm curious to see how their little talk is going to go. Considering everything that's happened, I don't think it's going to be that bad, or at least I hope it's not. Anyway's Buffy seems to have an admirer to keep her busy. Loved the update – keep them coming ... :) |
| Was great to see an update! I check back this site for your and Wolfkin's fics. I loved this update, for several reasons. Firstly the unending adorableness of the Will/Faith pairing that I love. Also, Buffy enjoying how clueless everyone thinks she is is hilarious. Brilliant bit. Whole thing well written and looking forward to more. Please update your fics again soon. Thanks. |
| This is a good story please write some more I'm enjoying it immensely. |
| awesome chapter. cant wait for the next one. |
| So I guess that Glory is the First, in which case, Buffy's gonna go flying through the air with the greatest of ease and go smack into the wall, or she's gonna boot right into Dawn, either way, not fun. But funny. Either those two, or Glory is back, which I doubt. Seems more likely that she's the first. Ace chapter, please continue, I wanna read more. JJS x |
Can you say ultimate cliffhanger?!
Later |
Love this fic and love the update. Something about the key and her mate, altering the line, finding the power. Is Kennedy becoming a Slayer or something? Healing etc. Intriguing. And then is Glory actually back? Or is Buffy going to go sailing through "Glory" aka the First? Hmm....
Lots of questions, not as many answers, Very intrigued.
Thanks and looking forward to more. |
Great update. I actually had to go back and reread the story, cause I had forgotten parts. Still as good as ever. Can't wait to see where you are headed with this.
Buckster |
Had to re-read the story, but what an update!!! Is Glory the First or is she back?? Mmm...
Can't wait to read more. |
| Wow I never saw that ending coming I can hardly wait for the next chapter! |
| THIS IS AN AMAZING STORY...... I WOULD HOPE THAT YOU CONTINUE AND FINISH THE STORY........PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE.... LOVE IT |
| SOOOOO GOOD, CANT WAIT FOR MORE |
| damn does kennedy and dawn have to go threw the portal (that would be cool you know instead of buffy) keep it up and i'll keep reviewing good work |
| I loved the opening scene with Dawn trying to make Buffy feel better after being ass kicked by the First. Busy night with all those dreams. I especially liked the interaction between Dawn and Kennedy – curious to see how Dawn explains how she came to be and what Kennedy’s reaction will be. Great job. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year ... :) |
I LOVE it! This is one of my favorites.
Thanks |
I love Buffy when she's all pouty, haha. That was funny!!!
And a lot of dreams, that's always the start od trouble.
Like a lot how Faith is supporting Willow.
Can't wait to read more.
Happy holidays!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| This is getting interesting I'm enjoying it. Thanks! |
| So, last night I was reading various fics on other sites, and suddenly wanted to read the fic that had Willow/Faith, and I could remember bits of it and knew it was over here, and suddenly remembered which one it was (as I knew Kennedy had to be paired off with someone else for that to happen). So I re-read this last night and am about to re-read it again as I really love this one, both the D/K but especially the W/F. So I am here, hopefully asking for updates, please. |
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