Reviews for After The Fall
Really nice start, love the F/G interaction.
And the W/K was yummy:)
More please! |
| love the start please continue soon |
really great start
everything seems ok between Kennedy & Willow,
so i'm waiting to know why Kennedy will get closer to Dawn
keep on & update soon |
| Love it, excellent start to the story, really looking forward to the next chapter, please post soon :o) |
| Woo! I have 2 ppl takin up my challenge now :D...I like the story so far, the Faith/Giles speech was really good, and I liked the idea of water conservation :P...Can't wait for Dawn but I shall :D...Update soon I really like it, you and Willowfan are like...Amazing...XxX |
| Yay, glad yo are doing a K/D stpry. Love that pairing! Update asap! |
I love updates! Very nicely done.
Loved Dawna and the blackmail-
priceless! And lots of other parts
but I don't want to spoil it.
It was happy and sad-a good mix!
More please. |
| that was an interesting update with all the things going on. can't wait to see where this goes. |
| Cool chap. Can;t wait for Dawn/Kennecy. Love your writing. Update asap! |
great chapter
sad for Wood & Faith
still looking forward to know why they'll break up & how K/D will get closer
keep on & update soon |
| Woo...Nice chap...I'm back too...I think, though I'm decorating at the minute so I may seem distant :)...I love that Faith is softening up, I kinda relate more to Faith than any of the others...Can't wait for the couple switching, and Welcome Back! :D...Luvyaz XxX |
Very good update! I'm all worried about
Xander--fix him soon! The movie scene
was gensis-nice plot point. Loved their
reactions---oh and can't forget Buffy's:D
I love it when she's all confused!
More please! |
Oopsy--I can't spell-that should say genius!
Which the whole idea was--way cool. Loved the
the scene and the whole chappy---more--lots
more please-now is good!!!! :D:D:D:D |
| well, it looks like the Summers women will be reaping the benefits of the breakup which might actually be mutual. update soon |
| Hey...I don't like you...I love you! lol...It's brill, loving the confusion, please update soon I get all excited and start dancing, then recieve confused looks from random people that see me hehe...Go you, it's ace, I'll shut up now...Yay...*backs off* Luvyaz XxX |
i don't like to read that Kennedy's realising that she's not in love with Willow :-( they seemed so good together in the 1st 2 chapters
but it'd be cool to see Willow & Faith becoming closer after that, kinda comforting each other & maybe more??(i'm not a fan of W/B)
keep going |
| Well...I'll always review...cos I always love your stories lol. Especially this one. Interesting stuff brought up in this chap such as a Will/Buffy thing, and Kenn realising something is off in her relationship with Will. Love K/D, can't wait for more! |
| i like it :) please continue |
| Yay for corrections on Chapter 3, can't wait for Chapter 4 :D XxX |
| poor Dawnie is having lusty dreams about Kennedy, and you know that Buffy is going to tease her about it which might cause Kennedy come to her defense. I like the possible Faith and Xander hookup. loving this story and update soon |
:D so much happened--I'm
all excited. Loved the F/X talking
and the Faith backstory--and the
Kennedy battle and the well of
course the bit with Dawnie at the
end. can't wait for more-fireworks
are definitely in the future! |
| Have just read chapters 4A and 4B. Brilliant! I love your writing and your stories! I am a huge fan. I gotta say...I am seriously cheering for D/K and even more for a Faith/Xander pairing, cos she seems to be showin him more of who she is. Plus, there would be so much drama brought up by that pairing. Gotta love all the drama D/K, W/B and F/X pairings would cause. Update soon! Thanks! |
Oh...My...God, are you really leaving it there?...You can't be leaving it there...You are aren't you! Argh! Update soon...*waits patiently*...*fidgets*...*pout*...Update soon then!
It's brill *mwah* lol...Later XxX |
| hey. yeah please continue this is goin great |
| WoW!!! You have to update soon, I loved it :) |
hey update soon i am really intrested on how this is gonna pan out. please update soon
kerryxx |
| I think tis is a pretty good story and it is getting better all the time looking forward to the next chapter! |
Loved the update! Faith just keeps surprising people:)
Hope Xander starts to work his way through the pain
of losing Anya Loved the D/K/W tease. |
| it's nice to see Faith looking out for Xander, and with him actually liking her company. can't wait to see more of the Buffy/Willow/Kennedy/Dawn interaction. |
| I like the Faith and Xander friendship. I wonder if Buffy or Willow will get upset bout it later. Looking forward to the Dawn/Kennedy chapter. Update soon! Thanks. |
| Darn you, why'd you put a teaser...Now I really can't wait!!! ARGH! :P Lol...I hope you update-y soon-y as I can't wait-y 'cos am impatient...Yup...I don't mind they Faith-y-ness, I like Faith...So It's all good...XxX |
| good lord, why Kennedy and Dawn just announce that they both have feelings for each other with back stepping they were doing and I think Buffy sees something but not real sure Willow does. great update |
| I LIKE IT! Hehe, thought you'd forgotten :P...Loved the embarrassment in that chapter, was most satisfying. I like that Faith's resolving her badness, that's always a good thing to see. *dances* I'm ill right now, and this just made my sick day and my 9.30am doctors appointment so much easier to swallow with a swollen thrat! Thankyou!!! XxX |
Great story cant wait to see what happens hope theres More K/D parts soon
update soon. |
| LOVE IT! The dynamic between Xander and Faith is great. I love that she has managed to help him a bit in his time of grief. It's clever the way Dawn etc find that strange that they are friendly. Love the whole W/D/B/K love-square thing lol. Complicated. Update soon! THANKS! |
LOVE the update! Like the whole lightbulb analogy!
And the D/K blushy moments...and the Faith/Xander
geekness...and the can't wait for more. Now's a very
good time;) ;)! |
i like i like i like i like
please go on with the story |
| Very good. I can't wait for the next update. |
| Omg that was so mean! haha. Glad you're back on this story |
| keep going i like it so keep updateing :) |
Oh my gosh! That was excellent! This is one of the BEST Kennedy/Dawn stories.
It is truely amazing. Words can't express how much I love it. I can't wait to find
out what happens next. I like how it shows what Kennedy and Dawn are thinking
and feeling. Since Kennedy sort of admited that she wasn't in love with Willow, I
wonder if Kennedy and Dawn will fall in love. Don't worry, I believe you when you
said you will update chapter 9 in a few days. lol I will be checking again soon.
I can't wait for the update.
Thank you so much! :) |
| Great update. Just got to wonder something, where were Buffy and Willow when everyone got home? Can't wait to read more. |
| Niiice! Cant wait to see her reaction! Update soon please! :D |
| keep going can't wait for another update!! love it :) |
Wow! You know, I just came back from vacation and it was absolutely horrible.
But this update makes up for it. Please, please, please don't leave it like this for too long.
I need to know what happens next. I'm dieing to find out. I want to see what Kennedy and Dawn
will do and how Buffy will react. I'm really hoping Kennedy and Dawn will fall in love. I also hope
Buffy and Willow will fall in love. I'm sorry to hear that about Willowfan. Willowfan writes awesome
stories, too. I hope Willowfan feels better. I wish Willowfan good luck.
Thanks so much for the chapter. Please update really soon. :)
Sincerely,
soccerfan |
| love it cud u plz c if my story is gd im new and wundered if u cud tel me if its gud :) thanks |
| I love the story and I reeeeallly hope you come back and finish this one up really soon because I love the Dawn/Kennedy pairing and there just aren't enough fics about them so please come back and finish this. |
| this is gud r u going 2 add another chap 2 show how dawn reacts to kennedy leaving will |
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