Reviews for A New Dawn
| Great story. Can't wait to read more. |
| Keep it coming...sounds real good!!! Unique as well!!!! |
| I love this story. You have to keep going with it. It's awesome. |
| Very good. Loving it, so please continue. I want more! |
| Love it! Write more soon. |
| Really cool! Write more as fast as you can. |
| Really liking it, so keep it coming. |
| I like it so far Must have more |
| oh wow i like it so far... keep it up and update, pleeeease? lol |
| i really love what ur doing...this so good... |
| OH....MY....GOD.... *faints backwards* |
| WOW....What a great store. Keep writing. I cant wait to read more. Love it. |
| That's a hot story. You should continue it. |
| hey i just wanted to say this story is kicken so far , i really like it , so write more soon!!!!!!!! |
| I really liked your story and I hope you continue to add on to it. |
| K.... I've been reading on here for a few months and have NEVER reviewed, cause my internets slow so i was like I'll just review on the extremely good ones.... so I guss your the first. Feel special. Lol. Write more. Love new girl's name... just can't spell it. |
| i like it, i hope to see more. |
| please, update ! Your story 's so cool, I can't wait ! |
keep writing with the dawn scenario as well, its really cute............its an interesting story to explore i think.
great work |
| Dude need to update, love the story but need more... cant leave us hangin forever. |
| YaY!!!! you finally updated!...I've been waiting for a new chapter for sooooo long. Awsome story so far, I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work! |
| please please please write more i really like this story and i don't see that many of them out there.. |
| Sounds good, i like the "new Dawn ". Continue |
| Wow. I read a lot of fan fics and that's one of the best one's I've ever read. Possibly THE best. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read the next chapter! |
I need more!!! It's so good! Keep it up!
~Kayla |
| You should deffinatly write more. It's really great. |
| nice story, but want to read more of it... plz continue the story. |
| This story is great , i absolutly love it!!!!!!! pleezzzzzzz write more asap! |
| We want more keep it cumin it sounds grate so far but cum on we want more! |
| Thats a kicken chapter, i love this story keep going!!!!!!!!!! |
bravo!
very well written! i would love to see more asap please! very good story. |
It's so cuuuuuuuuuuuute!
Dawn's never really had enough recognition and this just makes me smile. It's so sweet. But I wonder what the deal was with her old school... maybe unaccepting people? Who knows? All I know is that I love this fic. I hope you keep writing it, it's brilliant. |
| Cum on we want more like the path ur goin with this but we want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Whoa... this is SUCH a good fic, kinda describes a situation I'm in now too. Whaaa update more! More! More! |
| This is my favourite fanfic on here, I've probably read it over 5 times by now. I've always thought Dawn should be gay. I love the way you describe things so well, Teagan (i think that's how it's spelled) is a very captivating character. I like the movie you picked too, Tomb Raider. Any Angelina Jolie movie is a good choice. I was wondering what Dawn's outfit for her date looked like though... I like the slow-ish pace that the girl's relationship is taking, it's not just jumped into like a lot of stories. This is bloody brilliant. |
I've never really noticed Dawn before, so I cant say I like her character but I think you are doing a good job with this story.
Keep up the good writting, please add some more soon! |
| its a really gd fic and u should keep writing it for a very long time, coz ur really good at writing |
| Great story, I can't get enough of it. Keep it going! |
| This is goin fantastic the chapters cud do with bein longer and we want more!That was a hint! Ur story is great! Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Oh man I can't wait to read more |
| ur driving me crazy, write more, it's so good |
Your Story I can review in one word.... "Damn" You have talent
Keep writing on it I want to know how this Dawn thing turns out if she gets her first kiss by a girl that night or she has to wait... And to see what her big sister has to say about them and what Wllow has to say to..
It was just to good loved it all the way though.... |
| This story kicks so much ass!!!!!, pleeeezz keep going asap cause i love this story! |
| you're fan fic is so rockin... keep it up! |
| The new chapter is so good, I have to review it again. I love it I love it I love it. I want a Teagan action figure or something now, and a Dawn one too. Thanks for letting me know what Dawn is wearing, I think I laughed a little too hard when I found it thrown in there. Thrown in well though, of course. Anyways, i'm done this review now. |
| er.. more.. now... please... please... please... :-( I'm desperate :-P heheh. 's fic rocks... but wheres the w/k in here too :D |
wow just had to say that the 'A New Dawn' story was absolutely HOT!
You should write a follow up or even a new story conserning the other characters.
Can't wait to read your next story,
Vix*** |
I've already reviewed, but I figured I'd repeat myself and say this story is AWSOME...it's one of my favorites right now, great writing and a great storyline backed up by great characters, what more could a girl want? (other than more...hint, hint)
...I want a Teagan for Christmas this year...shutting up now. |
| i love this story it´s funny and you like the word uber, uber-Buffy i like it really, also the whole - dawn-thinking |
| hey girl, this story kicks ass, keep it coming, the faster the better... |
| Wow! WOW! That's what I'm talking about. Very original, unlike my story. Good work! |
| keep going please i love it have to go to school soon so hurry up with it i love it so much :) |
| keep going keep going...loving the writing..great talent to describe bueatiful scenery...love the interaction between the two its so natural..and the fact you have good english is a plus... |
| I love it Babe, you rock at this. |
| Great update but keep it cummin ur story is fantastic ur a great writer! |
| Awww, dude. Serious awwness. The Aww-ness award should be dedicated to u. I wasn't sure if i would like a story dedicated to Dawn, but I do. Great job, great fluff, great dialogue, great everything. Congrats and continue. |
| Yayness, Babe, you so rock. I love it. I'm so glad I pushed. God, girl you are so awesome. Can I just say awwwww that was so cute. Ilove it. Can't say that enough. God, you are good. I was like on the edge of my chair with Teag speaking one word at a time. I was like hurry, bu them all with the Yayness. I want total teasing in the morning. I love it. You rock babe. |
| i want you to continue hope you had fun at the beach its finally good to read an update on this story. anyway keep it going i like it |
| It just keeps getting better. I can't wait until there is more. |
| i love it keep going please please |
| Oh my god that was so cute... i love the story its really great. |
| hey, this fanfic is sweet, you have talent!!! keep up the good work! |
| kool story, keep it comin!! |
| oh my freaking god! i love it! and i didnt get bored *smiles cutely and winks*. you have to promise to tell me everytime you update it!!!!! mmk, enough loser-ish-ness, ill talk to you tomorrow hopefully =) ....err....later today, whichever. *sigh* |
| wow hot and romantic! keep it coming! |
| wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! that was sooooooo rockin'. I think you should never end this fic, and it's too bad I'm SERIOUS! Aww and I love the way you make Kenn & Will the CUTEST couple. Heheh |
| i love this story its nice and very well written. keep it up. |
| omg!!u r soo talented! i've never been so interested in a story in all my life!! a friend of mine made me read like the first chapter and i got hooked! please keep writing more! i've never read something so detailed in emotion. it's so great!good job! keep writing im sure it'll make many ppl happy! |
| Hell Yeah! That was awesome. Totally an "A+" Keep going with it. Don't let it end there. |
| That was so beautiful, you really captured the moment between Dawn & Teagan. I like the way its all so innocent. Keep up the good work. You are very talented! |
| the story rocks plz keep going |
| oh man, i love what you did with the dawn-teagan relationship. i want you to keep going and back off on the will kenn action. i mean yeah it is good, but we don't want their relationship to be all about sex. of course the title coincides with the dawns new relationship, maybe their relationship can develop and hit the rocks, just as all relationships do. that is when will and kenn enter to try and make things better. will can go to dawn, and kenn to teag, or vise versa. miscommunication of what was said only makes more turmoil, for both relationships. think about it and make us happy. |
Aaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
Hehehe. That is so beyond cute, it's so far beyond it that it's spiralling off into a new dimension.
So are Willow and Kennedy going to be the big advice givers when Dawn gets all confuse-y about Teagan? Lucky that she has them...
-grins-
Woohoo! I'm somewhat articulate! |
hey i know ive already reviewed but the last 2 chapters so made me need to again they were exellent, and so well written. Totally well done but you so need to write faster. lol
jodi xxx |
| Thanx for the quik update!I like the idea of Teagan havin a bit of a dark past that she doesn't want to be revealed! but wot ever u decide we want MORE! |
| I'm in awe. The new chapters are beautiful. I need to go read them again after this. I love how Teagan is a singer, I hoped she would be. I think the W/K stuff works really well, and this fic keeps getting better and better... |
that was very good! i just love this whole story and hope you continue it cuz it is soooo cute.
BRAVO |
| WOW!! this is some GOOD stuff. i dunno want i want to happen next. SURPRISE US!!!! whee, i love this story! it makes me happy to see Dawn with someone. i always felt kinda sorry for her. good work! |
| Update already, girl! You're almost as bad as me. Wait no, I wouldn't go that far... |
| okay, you have us all captivated by your story, and now you are just leaving us hanging. that's crazy! come on, hurry and write, i am very busy today so i hope to find a updated story when i come back. please! i'm on my knees, and begging saying please. |
| i really love your story. i cant put to words so forgive me. i was wondering though how far are you going to take this. and if you dont want to answer that i really hope that you continue to add more. |
| this is like my favorite story..i just love it and that line about...i breathe faster when you speak but when u touch me i forget how..thats just about the best line i have ever heard...and i've heard and created some of the best...i love where your going and what your doing and i'm willing to wait for the chapters..cause there that great...*cough*buffy and faith*cough* not that i'm trying to imply anything ;p |
| hey, you best be updating!!!! i really like this story, i get distracted from my homework i should be doing to read your story. not many of these fics do that, so consider yourself special times ten. anyway, come on, one chapter, i will be happy if you write just one chapter. why not seven to make me extremly happy? why not make a sequel to this? just write! i'm going to cry now, *crying*. okay, i've stopped, please write. |
| please more i beg of u more please i love it more more hurry please |
| this story is sooooooooo cute....keep writing it please///................its awesome. |
| fantastic! keep it coming please hopefully chapter 10 will be along soon! |
| keep it going this is a great story |
| keep going please like now please |
| please keep going its GREAT |
I am TheAntiHero
but man! EVER GUNNA UPDATE?!?!
no?
ok then... |
| This is so frikken adorable. I almost fell out of my chair from laughing so hard. Pankcakes. Need pankcakes. Babe, I'm so happy you got a chance to write despite your school work. I love it. Whenever you get the chance wrtie soem more. I like the Kenn and Will sweetness. Always a good way to go. Two Thumbs Up. |
| Awww. That was so cute!!! Keep going please with the awesome piece of writing!!!!! |
| man i love this story!!! keep it coming p...p...p....pwwweeeeaasseee *smmiles and flutters eyes innocently* hehhehehee |
| Love the story. can't wait for more. |
FINALLY!
Wooo!
Even if you take forever you still manage to astound me. You and you're talk of mediocre. Pssssh.
So cute! Awwww!
Love! As always. |
| i think i speak for all of us when i say, "WE WANT MORE!!!" |
I'm totally with the rest, MORE!!!!!!!! Love it!!!!!!!!!!!
XxTxX |
| keep it going this is really good! |
Hey Keep it up its great!!! keep adding on to it.. I'm so glad someone makes Dawn happy.
You have so much talent its crazy... just wanted to let you know.. bye
*Lil' Will* |
| Great story. I'm glad I finally got to read it. Keep it up. |
| Its great but we want more! i've been on hols for a week and the first thing i checked out on the net wen i got bac was this i was a bit disapointed to only c 1 update! Ur a great writer but cum on we want more! Pleaz! |
| come on, you have to at least write something before i go to class on monday. i won't have time to get on this site anymore. that means i won't have time to read this kick ass story anymore. so write one more chapter before monday, please. two chapters would defiantly make my day! :) |
need another update! im dying here!
~ Mina |
| sniff sniff... todays my bday...and all i wanted...was another chapter... hahah i'm jk! |
| this is so GREAT! keep it up. must have MORE!!!! |
| well, i am off to school and there is no turning back. i promise you that i will try to read your story when i have a chance. i love this story and i can't get enough of it! every chance that have to research for a paper, i will get on this site first to see if you have updated. |
i've been waiting patiently for you to update, and, well, i just can't wait patiently ANYMORE! so i'm starting wait INpatiently as of now. :-D update soon, i love the story!
~ Mina |
| please dont stop writing this its seriously the best story!!!!!! keep going i love it. |
hey jus wanted to say that i love ur story
it was really well written with a certain edge to it
could u make others?? pppppplllllzzzz!!
ur a really great writer
keep up the good work |
| its so good, hurry up and write some more ur driving me crazy, i need to know what happens,write more,more,more i need more please! |
| plz plz add a new chapter soon |
| OMFG IF YOU DONT UPDATE SOON I WILL DIE!!! |
| OMG! i go away for like a couple of weeks, mind you school is torture, hoping that you my dear have been writing, only to find that you haven't. tsk, tsk...please update! |
| No Dawn!? No Teagan!? The W/K stuff was good though. I just want more. Teagan should give Dawn a rose at some point... because I'm a sappy romantic. Add more soon! |
You bitch. You're not supposed to be all spectacular writer! No fair! -sulks-
Ok, I'm over it.
It's so gorgeous... uber-terrific way of pulling the reader into the descriptions. That scene was major on the 'cute' scale.
Bitter? Me? No... |
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww yay thankyou soo much : )
[this doesnt mean u can stop tho'] hehehehhee |
| It's great, wonderful, absolutly awesome. Can't wait for more. |
Ooooh, yay! You don't know how happy I am that you've updated! I LOVE YOU!!! Lol. Love the story, it's really wonderful!
~ Mina |
| yep. that totally brought me to tears :-). awwwww that was sweet. more! more! more! hey.. my big bro goes to FSU :-) random thing i though i'd bring up - LoL |
| Hell yeah, wonderful fic! More! |
| great! i loved it. please update very very soon. this is my fav story and i want more!! |
I'm offically shitty at you.
Have this habit of not keeping up your end of bargains don't you?
And I'm bored, I need something to read. -growls-
"Tuesday Morning
In the dark
I was finding out
Who I was."
Shower scene ;). |
| A-W-E-S-O-M-E. I love it. Absolutely love it. All smiles here. Once again Izzy its great. |
| that was one of the best fanfic's i've ever read, could you write more pleazz? |
| I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! |
whats going on missy?? i totally adore this story and i am die'n to see what happens.......plz plz plz dont stop writting it!!!!!!!! i love it soooooooooo much!!!
keep going!!!! : )
-loz |
| UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IM GOING THROUGH WITHDRAWL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH |
| come on come on come on come on come on ........(silence)(deep breath)come on come on come on come on come on come on come on IM DYING HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Oh, my, gurl. It was awesome. Funny as hell too. Izzy you are genious. I know I spelled that wrong. |
| awsome cant wait till more |
Whoa! Look at the flying pigs!
Finally the world begins revolving again. Or not. Either way.
Majorly high on the cute scale, hopefully it won't take you as long next time.
Love!
~Becca
[p.s. You owe me sooooooooooooo many chapters] |
| OH MY GOD, it was ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo worth the wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) |
| i think you should take more breaks , and this was a good chapter the music i'm listening too right now makes it that much more special. |
| I am really curious whats happend next i hope you updated it soon. |
| that was awesome! you sooo cannot stop there!!! update update, i yell update!!!!!!!!!!!!:) soon very soon. This is my fav story so u better update it soon!!!!!!! |
| iiiii nnnnnnnnneeeeeeeeeeeeddddddddd mmoooooooooorrrrrrrrreeeeeee fanfic, pleaz :) :):) :) |
| gr8 chapter, gr8 fic, plz add more soon coz its really gd |
| great update but cummon keep it cummin |
| yo man! come on, its being soooooooo good but you need to be a quicker writer, i cant stand the all wait any more, i need to knows what happens!!!!because ITS SOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!! keep it up!!!!! |
This is story is awesome i am so sorry not to have reviewed before.
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this story and please update evryday - impossible i know but hey a girl can wish!!!! |
| MORE!!! WRITE MORE!!! YO SOY MUCHO IMPACENTE! |
| very good plz update soon |
| cum on add sumfing plz its 2 good not 2 so hurry |
| UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEE |
i'm waiting for some more
yo soy mucho impacente! (i i am very impacent) |
hey, this is soooooooooo good, when r u gonna continue? i'm just dyin 4 another chapter...whats all dat studyin good 4 anyways? (jokes) this is where ur real talent lies, hope ur followin it!!!
anyways i'll be waiting in anticipation 4 an update ...soon...i hope... |
| pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz write more soooooooooonnnnnnnnnn |
| come on girl your adoring fan's need more |
| come on, we, your fans, demand more. nearly two hundred reviews and you still keep us waiting. oh well, you always seem to make us happy when you write one chapter. |
| what the hell why wont u update |
| oh cant wait hopefully itll be sooner than you say |
| This was awesome, i am not sure if i have reviewed before but the second to last chapter was funny and the last chapter so far was emotional and so sweet so carry on writing and soon. |
| im glad you finally updated, and that there will be many more chapters :) |
| Great story. I love the way you had Dawn tell her sister. Very good work. |
| it keeps gettin better keep writin!!! |
that was really good pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz write moreeee sooooooonnnnnnn
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oh cool, thank god you added another chapter i was going mad
the chapter was awsome and you should wright more quickly-er 'gurr-arrg' ok kiss kiss bye! |
| funny bunny you came back and i'm still on the sugar and all is happy |
| hey chick what is the deal? hopefully when you do update it will be soon, i can't wait for your new chapter!!! |
| my gf just broke up wit me so add sum more 2 cheer me up plz i beg u |
| this is great, please dont stop |
| whoooo!!! you gave us two chapters and then you leave us with another cliffhanger! its okay because you gave us TWO chapters. looking forward to the next one or two. |
| omg. I love this story. please update soon. |
| sweet!!!! PPPPPPPPLLLLEEEAAAAAZZZZ PLEAZZZ WRITE MORE SOON PLEAZ!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
wow! what can i say kid u do be a talented writer, u do be that!! really loved the story cant believe u actually made me like dawn! so any plans for more yet? as sad as it sounds i cant wait for the rest! (things are a bit slow at the moment but honestly i do have more to do than read ur excellent fanfic..........damn am thinking u saw right through that?) saw at the start of ur chapters u've picked a uni, so wat u studying? liking it?
keep up the good work with this story and don't want 2 sound pushy but please update soon;) |
| come on pleaz write more soon it's killing me!!! |
| oh come on now, it's been way to long u really should make a new chapter... |
| Hey thought you weren't gonna update until next month. Not that i'm not happy i'm very happy. Chipper even. Keep going. |
| i'm happy, i'm happy, are you happy? yeah you are. more chapters |
| IM AM SOOOOO GLAD YOUR WORKING ON THSI STORY AGAIN. I'VE LOVED IT FROM THE BEGINNING!!!! |
Nice to seen you back mi'dear. It has been a while hasn't it? For many things.
It's almost refreshing to know that you're back in action and not so IB bound, and I have high hopes for you yet girly. Hope the stuff we discussed is going alright for ya, I'll email you soon it's just that NZ's being a bitch and stuff so yes...
On the story: You know how I feel about your writing. There is little left to be said on this subject, but I must say that the cuteness factor keeps hitting the highness on the Adoro-scale.
Miss the chats, but I still think of you on the odd occasion.
-Becca- |
| when are you going to update? |
| hey hey love it write more |
| thought u sed u were gonna update regulaly its been ages |
I ABSOLUTELUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!! You have sucha great imagination and I'm actually in love with this Teagan person. And I thing it's about time that People incorperated Dawn into the mix. Except this time, the story is all hers. I'm loving it so much. Keep writing and keep that imagination going good.I think you are SO totally cool. And you capture the characters so damn well. I'm just all around impressed. You are the coolest and I luvs yah lots for making this story. MAKE MANY MORE CHAPTERS!! Just keep going.
Mae |
| this was the best thing I have read in a long time plase continue I can only hope that you will I know it has been a long time but it is never to late to try this story made my heart melt and it is truly the story of my life. this is great please continue well if you don't its ok i liked what you had!!!!!!1:-) |
| Awesome, awesome story!!! You are a very talented writer, keep up the good work!!! |
| I love you fiction. I try to read all you updates as soon as I can. I can't wait for the next chapter. The story is going great, keep it up. |
| This story so far has been my favorite story on the whole site! It makes me feel as if I'm actually living it. And that makes me crave the story even more. I can't wait till the next installment. |
| congrats on the scholarship!! miamis noooot exactly my favorite school .. heh, FSU semi's rep-ruh-zent, lol. but still, congratulations! awesome fic still man .. i'm lovin' it ... =D |
| Ultra nice cuteness! We need more cuteness (in a gay kinda way) so please continue...*takes out notepad* |
Whoa... Hurry ya gotta give me more!!!
i can't wait I'm ADDICTED! |
| So glad you updated. Very nice story. congrats on your college entry, toooo. |
| PLEASE ADD MRE CHAPTERS SOON!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY |
| english isnt my mother language, and there is no buffy the vampire slayers series in our television program now, the last one was season 4 i think...btw your story is great, this is the second that i've read and 2 thumbs up seems not enough...pls keep writing this story..especially dawn-teag things.. |
| YAY! i can't wait ontill you post the next chapter!!!!!! |
| Great story so far. Keep going please!!!!!!!! |
-giggles-
Okay, they're SOoO sOoOo gonna break the rules. And here's me wishing I was Dawn... lalalaaaa. -cough- Anyways...
... keep it coming uber-chica, it's awesome about your scholarship, I told you that you deserve it, and you do. So -claps- HELL YEAH! I'm fully stoked for ya bub.
This is sort of a review... or an IM... I dunno. But I'm still en amred with your writing and... ahem... stuff.
When's Teagan gonna sing again? I wanna hear Teagan sing...
... or, ya know, maybe Dawn could sing for Teagan.
Love Always babe,
-Becca- |
| quite a great story so far. i'm really curious to what will happen next, though it's quite obvious to what will happen, but the way you write of what will happen, well, it's enjoyable. yeah...all that in two sentences. keep up the writing, and congrats on getting into miami. |
I'm just a french fan... but one thing is sure... I really really like this fic so there's only one thing you can do to make me lovin' it more: WHEN WILL YOU ADD A NEW CHAPTER?!! lol
tcho Vaness' ;) |
| I love your story. Keep it up |
| this story is so cute keep going (do they get jiggy?) lol (what are the will-ken presant's?) |
Whoa, You are the queen of fan fics seriously!!! But if you
don't hurry up and write more someone might dethrown you.
Come on don't leave me hanging!!! |
hey u gonna update or have u dropped of the face of the planet?????????????? PLEAZE UPDATE
I'm begging now....... |
| I still love it!! YEAH IT ROX! |
| Nice, really liking what I think is going to happen, softball girl... |
| Yeah go on, its short but great and funny, add the whole chapter soon :) |
Oh my gosh, You are a goddess, A sarcastic and sexy goddess, we can talk anytime!!!!
Loving the update pt. 1 and pt. 2 !!!!! |
That is sooo good and sooo cute at the same time! Good and cute; it's a powerful mix. Thank you for updating and if you need any more motivation *flashes hundred dollar bills*
Well, okay they're fake...but still, I tried. |
| OMG! this has gotten so so good, not that it wasn't good before. You are such a great writter, and I'm not just saying that to get another chapter, although another one would be good... |
Izzy-
So how's the spring break updating going since we talked yesterday?
Hopefully we can talk l8er and get to know each other better.
Luv,
-Serge |
| wooow. i love it. u hav 2 keep this going its such a nice story. |
| very gud keep it up its gettin betta da more u update |
| I just wanted to say that you are doing a great job with this story! I loved reading the story so far and I get sooo anxious to see it updated. This is one of my favorite stories that I have read, and I have read a lot of them. So, keep up the good work and I can't wait to see the next chapter. |
| good god i love this story its the best one ive ever read !!! u gotta keep going on it u have a gift! |
| If you do not update soon then I will...I'll...I probably won't do anything actually but I MAY keep on bugging you to update! Oh, I'm evil aren't I? Come on, you know I am!! Don't deny it; update! |
| PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER! I have been checking everyday since the first time i read and i can't wait any longer! I want to see what happen's between Willow and Kennedy! Please write the next chapter! |
Okay, I just got done reading this for the sixth time,
and it all still seems new, and that rocks..
Just like you Softball chic
-Serge |
| keep writing!!! omg this is soooooooo goood!!!! :) |
| Niice!!! I was dying with Kennedy and Willow doing their little skit about Dawn's first kiss thing!! Oh my goodness my parents thought i was crazy cause I'm sitting here up in my room by myself laughing my head off. This has been an exceptional fan fic so far, and it's come quite far, and I can't wait til the next update! |
| i can't wait 'till you write more!!!!!!!!!!!! please write more very very very very soonnnnn *runs in cicles going insane from waiting* pleaseeeeeeeee |
Hey there.... I've just read your story for the first time and I gotta say, I'm impressed!!!
Girl, you are extreamly talented... I love the way you create everything!! And can't wait to see what you have in mind for Willow and Kennedy:)
Please update soon!!! |
| The stories great but you need to update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| please write more!!! i'm going insane waiting....pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee write moreeeeeeeee!!!!! |
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!omg i loved it. wat a story. but will u update already im gonna die if u dont. i need to find out wat happenes between teag and dawn thee such a good pair.
oh and i loved the way u ended the story with "Teagan’s sleeping bag lay out on the floor, undisturbed and forgotten" it left u guessin so u have to finish that.but keep it up really good. |
| please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Worth the wait... How you tear your ACL?????? I like the hroniness.....
I think i may have to challenge you in my next one..... I think i could take you on writing sex...... |
| YAY!!!!!! *does happy dance* you added a whole THREE chapters!!!! YAY!!!! |
oh god@!!@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
cant breathe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
more soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
My Goddess!
You've out done yourself again girl.
You're lucky I'm reading this in public or I'd be jumping around like a frikkin' mad man.
It's been a while since I've heard from you, or read anything from you for that matter, so it's the bomb to finally have something.
I'll just say that... you still mesmerize me with the mental pictures you create, the sheer descriptive perfection of it. But you already know how en amored I am with your writing.
-sigh-
Wish I could get my act together and update. But... I'm lazy.
Love and IL Buddy Icons.
-Becca- |
| i'm bagging you please update soon!! please! it's driven me crazy!!! i need more!! pleaseeeeeeeeee!!!! |
| wow this story is great i was reading it and actually forgot to breathe |
| omg Izzy ur so talented! i've missed u hon! wish we hadn't lost track...miss u |
| *bangs head on desk* pllllllllllleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaasssssseeeeeeeeeeeee write more soooooooooonnnnnnnnnn *checks pulse* i think i'm gonna die waiting... i NEED to read more!! i've lost count of how many times i've read it over, and over and over and over and over (ect.) again................ |
| Come on been waiting forever it seems for you to continue, please please please write more. what do i have to do beg (gets on my hands and knees) PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Please, we need more. Your story is sooo good and i think i speak for all of us when i say it is time for more of the story. PLEASE!!!!!!!! |
| Never was into dawn until i read your story so please put up more chapters i want to find out what happens the next morning!! |
| I just wanted to say that this is an awesome story. I just wanted to know if you were going to update anytime soon can you please email me with an answer or when you update I would appriciate it. Thank You |
doin an amazin job
PLZ keep up the good work and add more!!
ASAP!! |
I have been reading this fanfic for a long time now, and to be honest it is very well written. This is one of the very few that I go back to every so often to see if you have written any more. This is my favorite. Your storyline is great. I hope you write more. You are a really good writer.
Amber |
| OH, this is sooo good! What will Willow say?! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| great work!!! congrats on finishing your freshman year!!! hope everythin goes well for ya!!! i am so glad 2 see u updatin this fic...i have been waiting 4 so long girl!!! so cum on...now that i have exams i need some relaxation time...and that means updates!!! LoL |
| wooohoooo updates ;) good chapter cant wait for the next one to come around. |
| awsome cant believe you have updated thats soooooooo phat good chapter |
| WRITE MORE!!!! :):):) THATS ALL I CAN SAY:):):) |
| I'm so glad you finally updated. I've actually almost stopped reading fanfic altogether, but I love this one. It's probably one of the best written fics I've come across and I'll definitely be checking for updates. |
phew....your back
i thought u left us agin...
that would have not been a good thing
but now that i no it was your computer and its fixed and your back all is good now
great chapter like always..and dun dun dun whats buffy going to do!!!
i cant wait for the next chapter
keep it up
loved it |
hey,, good update
willow has doubts and maybe wotout reason, kennedy love her more than her life and maybe kenedy can shows her how much in this trip more than willow can think and imagine.
Maybe in this trip kennedy ask her the big question, the question that willow wants to be asked.
see you soon
mar |
| Yay! You are continuing his story. Love the whole Willow having doubts and Kennedy not proposing. Can't wait to see Buffy's reaction! update soon! xxxx |
PPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ WRITE MORE I LOVE YOUR WORK :):)
KEEP IT UP AND DON'T KEEP US WAITING!!!! |
| Great stuff! a little short..but i forgive ya. just get with the updatin'!!! |
| Wow. That's all I have to say. |
WOW, THAT IS AN ENGAGED, WILLO WILL BE MORE THAN HAPPY, KENNEDY IS THE ONE FOR HER, SHE CARE A LOT FOR WILLOW, AND HER LIFE IS ARROUND HER, WILLO NEDDED SOMEONE LIKE THIS, WILLOW ALWAYS HAD TO CARE FOR EVERYTHING AND EVERYONE, BUT WITH KENNEDY WILLOW MEANS THE WORLS TO HER.
IM GLAD THAT A PERSON LIKE KENNEDY STRONG AND SWEET AT THE SAME TIME TAKES WILLOW AS A LOVE PARTNER
SEE YOU SOON
MAR |
| that was soo sweet omg it had me smiling the whole time i read it |
| i have a feeling anything in this story is bound to be great |
| yo!! love your story..keep it up! |
| Yay for the updates. I don't think the story is getting stale but you've written such a good story so far I will leave it to you. Please update soon! I want to see Buffy's reaction to the Dawn/Teag. xxx |
| sounde like a plan i think a little Dawn/Teag will be good i like the sound of that |
| i really really love the story so please keep writing and it is really good |
AWWW!!!
that was sooo sweet..
awsome story..
cant wait for an update..
and once again...
AWSOME STORY |
Izzy.
You.
So.
Kick.
Ass.
You've really developed more as a writer since you began this, more than a year ago now. Your description is liquid perfection, the proverbial tree sap is effective. The lacings of angst in some chapters creates a nice sense of balance, so as not too become too overloaded with fluff. As we all know, a tonne of fluff is still as heavy as a tonne of bricks. Mmmmm European spelling. Grammatically you've become practically flawless. The only thing I saw was sentences fragments, but that lends itself to your style anyway.
It's great to have to back, hun. Looking forward to much more to come from the increasingly talented you.
Love and furtive glances,
-Becca |
| Great story cant wait for dawn/teagan chapters but want lots more of willow/kennedy soon :) update please |
Wow!
this has to be one of the most amazing stories i've evr read, the lights in the water thing actually got me choked!
it was so sweet, but what was in that bottle? kepp it going, it rocks - and i want some of those chocolates in the mail!!
molly |
| i like where ur taking this story |
| Keep it comming yo. Its really good. |
PLZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
DON'T KEEP US WAITIN!!!
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
UPDATE ASAP!!!
:D:D:D:D |
| Wo0o0oTTT!! I'm sooo glad that you started writing chapters again!! I had stopped coming to this site a while ago, and the only reason I had returned was the wee shred of hope that maybe you would start it up again. Yay! Joygasm all the way :P Please update soon, I realllllly want to read more!! I'm dying here waiting!! :P You're doing a really awesome job ^.~ I still say it's the best fanfic I've ever read ^.^ |
| well i thank you for entertaining me for the past hour or two...as i am ill...and off school...and wow what a great fanfic...i got overwhelmed alot...and cried...bt shhh dont tell everyone...its really really good...and i look forward to you updating more...but i do agree on the fact that Teagan needs developing as an independant character...but i think i do prefer teagan/dawn match to kennedy/willow match but still...all is good...and i wish some girl would propose to me like that...phew...know which one it would be too...aaaaaanyways...moving on...good fanfic...Later XxX |
| hey just read ur story! was soooo good! keep up the good work! i added u 2 msn if thats ok! my addy id madandwild@hotmail.com shivy x |
| D.E.B.S. F*CKIN ROX!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Argh! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease Update!...I Love Your Story...Please *pout* *puppy dog eyes* ... XxX |
| I just wanted to tell you that I love this story very much. I hope you write more soon! |
| are you gonna update? pleaaaase? |
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