Reviews for Synergy and Symmetry *complete*
Awe wow, what an opening! I loved it.
I like how the new bad (I pressume is Ida and Leon) is outlined and mentioned. And I have a feeling (Ida's and Leon's) background will only get more interesting as the story progresses.
It's good to see how everything has come together, with Xander and Anya, Giles, Dawn and Faith. And with what Anya said to Dawn about being alive was very amusing. But it's quite obvious that things will start to deteriorate and turn for the worse, which I am excited and looking forward to, may I say!
Now, I have to admit, I absolutely loved the situation that Kennedy was in. It was hilarious! And her naming them Scar, Scruffy & Shrimp was classic! So very funny. And I laughed when she referred to them as 'dudes'.
And with what Faith said about the whole 'Dr Phil' thing and how she'd rather fight was priceless!
Overall, I loved it. It was brilliant. :D
Update soon. A friend. |
Very good start. The descriptions at the first was really interesting. As a West Texas girl my self I know about the storms and such although not as bad as Forth Worth gets them. I really enjoyed the first chapter and the whole Kennedy fighting what ever it was and the new big bad forming back into a vampire after Faith left. I can tell this is so going to be very interesting and exciting.. Will be waiteing for more...
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NooOOo! Kennedy, WHAT're you doing!?
*Ahem* Anyway :D that chapter has left me kinda flubbergusted, or something to that effect. Haha.
I loved the introduction of the family, it was good, with Portia and Emilio. And it's great to see how complex their relationships are with Kennedy, it's kinda sad when I think about it. She appears to be the outsider, although they want her to be involved.
Also, I really felt for Kennedy when those snobby men were talking about her. They don't even know her, so why pass judgement, eh!? Was uncalled for, and just plain mean. Ack, I hate people like that! But it was all good. Lol.
Seven months! Haha. I couldnt believe what I was reading. It was so funny, like extremely! Especially how Will continued bandaging Faith until she was "Mummified"! Classic. It was just amazing.
And then Kennedy was all with the smiles and words.
Please don't make her do anythiny! I mean, she can do something.. With Willow. But not with whatsherface... Carol, was it? Ick.
This story is fantastic, none of the less. Great update.
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Aww damn yo! That was funny the conversation between Faith and Willow. The whole Willow babble always brings a smile to my face. How re-assureing Faith was and all that was cool. Then the whole Kennedy thing between her sister. Then she does go to the parents party thing only to over hear harsh words and ends up in a bar chatting up one of her ex. Please she can't cheet on Willow that's just like so wrong. Now im ready to read the next chapter to see what's going to go down. Grate chap...
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| Haven't reviewed here in a long time but your story has something and i want to read more. oh i forgot my manner, pleaseeeeee. |
| awwwww i am so lovings this so far but i dont like what kennedyy is doing she has to go back to will! xxxxx |
so far so good...however i dont think i am going to like where your headed with carol...
...just as long as kennedy and willow end up happily ever after it will be a good story ;) |
| Best piece of writing on this site in a long time. Please give us more! |
| Great update. It was good to see Kenn and her father make peace. Keep up the good work. |
So didn't see that comeing. Kennedy's ex being vamp and all that shit had to suck major. Spike and his hustleing money. Wonder who the chick that took his money is? Does she play an inportant role in all this? As for the conversation between Kennedy and her father WOW.. That was a tear jerker. I didn't stop crying till the end. That was amazeing really. I'm glad that they are getting along and that Emileo stood of for her that was kick ass. Freaking awsome update..
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i'm back. I just realized something about the chick that Spike met or sort of met. It has to be the mistroyious vampire lerking around huh? lol.. Just poped in my head anyways i'm out.. till next update.. Keep it rocking..
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| thank you for not making anything happen between ken and carol....however didn't see the carol being a vampire part coming...very nice! |
| awww yay! ^_^ I LOVE the way Kennedy and Emilio interact. And I absolutely love the way this story is turning out, too. Can't wait to read your next update! =D |
| This fic is awesome! I love it! Kennedy and willow both ended up with vampires going after them. Looks like kennedys going to have al ot to make up for :D |
| Yay I finally read the first story to this one! ANd that was great, I love this story-it's awesome. Kenn and her family relationships are so interesting, and I really like Faith & Willows friendship- Faith as always makes me laugh, and Anya! You write her so well! The plot kicks ass, this Josh guy? Serious- Faith's gonna get up and save Will though right? Anyway, keep doing what you do cause its great! |
Oh man half of this chapter was funny. Willow trying to get threw the retlenss Josh to finely have to yell at him she like the girl on girl action :-D. That was funny then the whole walk threw the graveyard with Faith and Willow turned emotional. Brought tears to my eyes then all of a sudden a vamp jumps out which happends to be Josh no less. Damn quick turn of events. Kicked ass. Cant waite to see what happends next and if Faith or someone save's Willow from becomeing a night walker..
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| ooo me likey. keep it coming x |
Sweet. Kennedy save's the day, Faith was knocked out for a bit and was the first one to notice Kenn's new hair cut. Ok I so want to know what is up with that chick the one messing around with the gange. Don't tell me some how Thanatous is still lingering or something like him. That would just suck major ass for every one including Kennedy... This is so getting interesting I can't wate for more.. Keep up the good writeing...
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| Another great update. Can't wait to read more. |
| Oh that was very cool! I love how you write Faith and Kenn bonding! haha Faith feels like friggin' Oprah!! And Fox-what's going on there? She's the chick that Xander helped, right? I love this story! |
That chick just has so many names huh? Very interesting as to what her motive is with every one then singleing out Kennedy for some shit cause she is strong. No telling what the crap is going to be happening but i'm so looking forward to finding out. Keep up the grate writeing...
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| keep going and i think when it comes to kennedy she eaither wants to kill her or wants to strip her of her powers to give to her master eaither way sucky ass outcome |
Now I know why you call her Fox! lol. Damn sneeky little woman. I still wonder what's up with her. And oh what about Grace just passing threw that was a shock. Didn't expect that. Wonder what is up with her lately. This story keeps getting better and better. So love it. Keep up the awsome updates... Can't waite for the next.
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| OHHHHH shit ken's in for it now or maybe sneeky ploting fox is update soon |
oooooooooooo UPDATE!
lol pwease? |
| this is a really great chapter keep going i am sure willow and kennedy will work it out |
| ooo please update as soon as you can! i want to see what happens XD |
| Another great chapter. Can't wait to read more. |
| Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| omg you need to update more! you cant leave it there! |
the anger from willo is not for the chetaing thing if not that kennedy
doesnt love her enought to resist the pleasur in another woman,
to resist the urge to take another woman to not be enough for
kennedy the fear of not being enogh for kennedy and this attraction
that kennedy feels for Fox makes willow wonder if kennedy loves her
or see the love that willow feels fopr kennedy.
I hope kennedy can see that kind of love that willow has for her. |
| Your writing ability is excellent, the detail especially. I really enjoy reading your work and can't wait for more. Please add more asap! |
| hey i love it, and i loved your first story of this!! please keep going really really soon!!! :) |
| Great update. Looks like Kennedy is getting herself in trouble again. Can't wait to see what happens next. |
| hey keep going update soon cant wait |
| This is excellent, I actually look forwards to reading it! Please add more asap (i'm off work sick and this will help keep my mind of it) |
MORE please. It was fantastic as usual
Please dun leave us waiting so long |
| please please update really soon! i love it!! i can't wait to see what happens to kennedy! i wonder if fox finishes her off?? :) i'll love you forever if you update at least next week, or weekend!! :) |
| i left a review for this story and i meant it, but do you think you could consider looking into some of your other stories, like empty handed!! and update more :) |
| ooo very good chapter. update as soon as you can please! :D i love this story |
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YAY! Robin's back! *dances*
I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing. I HAVE been reading though, and I do say, it's coming along fantastically. ^_^ I can't wait for the next update!
Just in case, Happy Holidays and Happy New year. =D |
| This is really good... please continue. |
awwwww and oooooo more please! :)
can i have a cookie? |
| Great update. Didn't see that twist coming. Then again, if I did, it wouldn't be a twist. Can't wait to read more. |
| This fic is great. I look forward to it - seemed too long for this chapter so please speed the next one up hehe. |
| :|.. continue.. lol. loving this story. and noone updated in like 2 weeks!! |
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Say WHAT. That shocked the shit outta me, and yet..I see how that totally makes sense now. Oy. Please update soooon. ^_^ |
| ooooo thank you :) ken was really cute towards the end. Was nice to see Will and Ken share a moment.. Even if it was broken. Very nice :) Cant wait for more x |
Oooo. What's the spell for? o.0 I wanna knooow! *bounces*
Amazing update, once again. =D |
| interesting chapter. please keep going. i wanna see what happens next |
| happy 60th review! lol goh this story is so awesome! i love it! Sorry i havent reviewed much, been super busy, but i still love this fic! and i love where you're going with it, can't wait for more! |
| Keep going can't wait for the update so update soon please!!!! |
| Hey keep going i want to know what happens :D |
| ok really!!! how is she going to make this up to willow!!! u cant justify what she did without heart break there is no way!! |
| Keep going can't wait for the update (YaY For Kissing Tourtured Hott Vampires!!!) |
more!!!
i've been reading this for months!!!
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!
please :D |
| :| OMG! I didnt see that one coming! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! |
lets have a more yeh??
like nowwwwwww.
and why spike at the end? where did he come from?! :S |
| Great update. Love how you turned everything on Valic. |
| YAY! *dances* Okay. Am gonna wait patiently for the update, because otherwise the anticipation'll kill me. >.< I LOVE this story, though. Love love love it. =D Update soon! |
| Haha aww great chapter :) It was nice/kinda sad that Ashley didnt remember anything. Spose it was better for the character. Great story, Cant wait for the next installment |
| That was worth the wait... althought preferably less waiting next time. |
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