Reviews for Between Love & Madness
I really like this. You're off to a great start. I'm
eager to find out who the "other" is in this story.
Until next time.
Later |
| hey there. That was very very cool, really wanna know whats gonna happens so get the led out and update. thanks |
| Really great beginning. I like the interaction you have between the two sisters, Kylie and Kennedy. I can't wait to see where you are going with this. Keep up the good work. |
| Great start! I'm into it. Can't wait for more! |
I gotta admit, I'm a huge sucker for Willow/Kennedy, but this story is so promising I'd probably stick around for most any pairing you choose.
This first chapter was great. A bit like I imagined Buffy's life pre-season 1 (except delightfully more gay), which I suspect was intentional. Not sure, as of this point. what kind of parallel you're trying to draw between the two characters unless you plan for Ken to serve the role of Buffy as the only Slayer and drop her into the series in a revisioning of season 1. Whether you're doing that or tacking her on as an addition to a more cannon cast of characters, I'm sure the result will be interesting. On the whole, you did a nice job of establishing some backstory for Ken - introducing key characters, kicking off the major plot points and such. Ideally, there would have been a bit more light shed on Kennedy's status as the slayer and what that entails, but it's obviously something you'll address later. Your grammar and spelling were good and that really DOES make a story ten times more readable.
Overall, this was a great start and I really look forward to seeing more from you. Hope you post more soon.
PS: if this sounded pretentious at all, I'm really sorry, it's really meant to just be an attempt at constructive reviewing
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| Great update. Are you planning on who Kennedy is going to be paired with yet, or just going to go with the flow? Keep up the good work. |
| Hey there, really liking this, how you've gotten everything to link to the real eps, really wanna know how ur gonna make it play out, specially as im assuming there will be love in the air eventually :p keep going and update soon |
| realy gd keep it going loved the star of it ! |
Hey! Great story so far :)
Can't wait to see where you go with it and how it fits season 1! |
| hey i loved how u made kennedy a gud sister and how she keeps it, also if its ok wud u mind jus checking my stories i've only reacently joined and wud apprieciate it if you could. ps gud start 2 da story also funny :D |
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