NAWTYGRL
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Registered: 01/21/05
Posts: 5
Loc: Oh
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I've recently started working on a story but I'm in need of a fresh set of eyes. I need someone to read through a small section of it and tell me if it flows, it got kind of heavy on me really fast, and I'm not sure it fits the story.
So will anyone take a look at my next project for me? If your interested please let me know--my email, the one I check most often, is PERFECTBLU@YAHOO.COM or PM on yahoo same name. Thanks a bunch
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